Pilot wordclouds

In Mondays lesson we had a pilot feedback session , we watched each pilot and every group had to write feedback on it. we had three questions to answer on each pilot. 1.what do you think was going on in this pilot? 2.Is it suspenseful , if so why? if not , why not ? 3.What could be done to improve the sequence? we got feedback that wasn't so much negative but also not so positive , we had compliments on the first scene of the man chopping wood being quite suspenseful , but then we had negative but helpful feedback on the second scene of the knife cutting. The main feedback was that most people had no clue what was going on , we slightly blamed this on the fact that we couldn't finish the pilot which would have brought it all together. The feedback we got was overall very useful in terms of us fixing problems in time for the real shoot. When we got our feedback , in terms of answers for the questions . we placed them into word clouds , producing words which came up frequently. Here they are.
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