Wednesday and Thursday development.

Wednesday
In the wednesday lesson the group informed me of the new plans , I automatically disapproved of some points and shots but believed it was a good start and that we could expand and develop from this point now . Most of the lesson was spent thinking of new shots as we were still lacking in ideas for footage . the lesson didn't really come to much use as we still hadn't filled out the timeline sheets or come up with new ideas.
Thursday
On thursday another member of the group was ill , making it hard for us to get work done but by the end of the day we had completed all the work we had to have done by the weekend. we began by coming up with a title for the film . "Anna" . We agreed we would need to start a new idea , including old shots and themes from previous ideas . We sat talking and coming up with new shots , every know and then when we came up with one , we wrote it down on the timeline sheet and drew an image in the designated area of what we imagined it too look like .

We began with an establishing shot of a house , then silent shots of inside the house (a hall or room) , then the noise of a knife cutting things would begin , then a shot of a kettle or tap then the ecu of a knife cutting food , meanwhile the credits are coming on in a corner , slowly creeping away after every chop sound. We then had the idea of the screen fading into a black background , the title popping up , and the noise of an axe chopping , the title slowly fades away and then suddenly a low shot of a man aggressively chopping a piece of wood as if to chop the audience . then different shots as the man collects the wood , gets his dog into his car , drives off down a road. we would have quick ecu's of things like the keys going into the ignition , The dog panting etc. We then cut to a ecu  shot of a vacuum , then the woman cleaning again , and a mid shot of her in front of a window , vacuuming , we see the car drive past on the driveway , but the vacuum noise is so great she doesn't notice . The music builds with tension as a close up shot of her shoulders shows hands slowly scare her , the music lowers as tension ends as a shot of the man and her talking shows its just her husband . This was all a rough draft but , we got some good notes down , filled in the timelines showed above and completed what we should have .